'You look sooo cute!! I feel like eating you up', the direct message(DM) that just lit up her face. After all, it was from someone whom she had a crush on since quite some time. Sarah and Zidane followed each other for over a year and constantly exchanged RTs, tweets and stars on Twitter. They never messaged each other privately before this, and this was something Sarah wanted all along but she could never really do it.
Who would have thought such a simple text would change their lives so much? They kept DMing each other all day. Soon, they exchanged numbers and started sending each other texts on WhatsApp. Those cute texts would definitely help cupid set other people up as well. They added each other on all possible social media platforms. Talked for hours on the phone. They looked inseparable considering the fact that all their close friends knew about them inspite of them not meeting each other in person.
Sarah, being the shy girl she was; a hopeless romantic and believed all stories had a happy ending, somehow got the courage to ask Zidane to meet her. She was the typical I-love-going-for-walks-in-rain kinda girl who wasn't completely out of her bubble yet.
Zidane, being the confident guy he was, didn't think twice before saying yes. He was good with his words, had a charming smile that made it easier for him to get things done. He did justice to the 'Tall, dark and handsome' thing that girls usually look for in guys. His dimples, prominently visible inspite of his well groomed stubble, made it even worse for Sarah.
The day arrived when they had decided to meet. Both of them were very excited about it and Sarah just couldn't stop blushing the entire day. She tried at least 50 outfits before settling in on her favourite baby pink dress; looking as gorgeous as anyone could ever look. Zidane wore the classic white-shirt-blue-denim combination that never failed.
Here they were, eyes locked, lost in each other's beautiful souls, wondering how and when the grew so much in love with each other. He was at his best, using his ability to do wonders with words and she was at her best, making him fall for her even more every time she smiled and giggled. Hours flew like minutes and they just got in the car, about to leave when it started drizzling.
Zidane: Let's go for a drive.
Sarah: Yes, please!! I love going for long drives and you can't say no when the weather is so beautiful!
He let her play the music. Nothing ever felt as comfortable as the silence that followed. They talked to each other without saying a word.
Zidane: We've reached my farmhouse. Let's rest here for a while and we'll had back in an hour or so.
He played some soft music. Made himself a glass of scotch and got a glass of wine for the lady. They were talking about random things, having a couple of more drinks.
They got closer and closer and their lips locked passionately. She felt something she had never felt before....
She felt pain, pain because of the knife that was stabbed in her back. He removed it again and stabbed her again. The pink dress turning red slowly. The shocked eyes screamt, 'Why did you do this to me? I trusted you!'
He removed the knife and started stabbing her in the stomach. Slowly, dissecting her body; he ripped it apart and cut open her heart. Taking it in his hands, he smelt and started chewing it slowly; enjoying it like a 5 year old kid enjoys having chocolates and ice-cream.
There he was, sitting right beside his 7th victim, feasting on her body....
"YOU LOOKED SO CUTE. I COULDN'T RESIST EATING YOU UP"
Who would have thought such a simple text would change their lives so much? They kept DMing each other all day. Soon, they exchanged numbers and started sending each other texts on WhatsApp. Those cute texts would definitely help cupid set other people up as well. They added each other on all possible social media platforms. Talked for hours on the phone. They looked inseparable considering the fact that all their close friends knew about them inspite of them not meeting each other in person.
Sarah, being the shy girl she was; a hopeless romantic and believed all stories had a happy ending, somehow got the courage to ask Zidane to meet her. She was the typical I-love-going-for-walks-in-rain kinda girl who wasn't completely out of her bubble yet.
Zidane, being the confident guy he was, didn't think twice before saying yes. He was good with his words, had a charming smile that made it easier for him to get things done. He did justice to the 'Tall, dark and handsome' thing that girls usually look for in guys. His dimples, prominently visible inspite of his well groomed stubble, made it even worse for Sarah.
The day arrived when they had decided to meet. Both of them were very excited about it and Sarah just couldn't stop blushing the entire day. She tried at least 50 outfits before settling in on her favourite baby pink dress; looking as gorgeous as anyone could ever look. Zidane wore the classic white-shirt-blue-denim combination that never failed.
Here they were, eyes locked, lost in each other's beautiful souls, wondering how and when the grew so much in love with each other. He was at his best, using his ability to do wonders with words and she was at her best, making him fall for her even more every time she smiled and giggled. Hours flew like minutes and they just got in the car, about to leave when it started drizzling.
Zidane: Let's go for a drive.
Sarah: Yes, please!! I love going for long drives and you can't say no when the weather is so beautiful!
He let her play the music. Nothing ever felt as comfortable as the silence that followed. They talked to each other without saying a word.
Zidane: We've reached my farmhouse. Let's rest here for a while and we'll had back in an hour or so.
He played some soft music. Made himself a glass of scotch and got a glass of wine for the lady. They were talking about random things, having a couple of more drinks.
They got closer and closer and their lips locked passionately. She felt something she had never felt before....
She felt pain, pain because of the knife that was stabbed in her back. He removed it again and stabbed her again. The pink dress turning red slowly. The shocked eyes screamt, 'Why did you do this to me? I trusted you!'
He removed the knife and started stabbing her in the stomach. Slowly, dissecting her body; he ripped it apart and cut open her heart. Taking it in his hands, he smelt and started chewing it slowly; enjoying it like a 5 year old kid enjoys having chocolates and ice-cream.
There he was, sitting right beside his 7th victim, feasting on her body....
"YOU LOOKED SO CUTE. I COULDN'T RESIST EATING YOU UP"
My god, that was an awesome twist! Good one for a first attempt!
ReplyDeleteIt wasn't exactly my first attempt. You can check sachin141090.blogspot.in when you're free.
Delete'wicked' ka matlab kya hai waise??
ReplyDeleteBaap Thriller...You could name it Murder 4 as well.
Bhai,, isse wicked nahi, imagination kehte hai 😁
DeleteSachin , that was unexpected. And freaky what you did there at the end. Still feeling lil queasy. Very well written. Quite an imagination you have. Write more. :)
ReplyDeletePriya
Thanks a lot for those kind words, Priya. Such positive words keep me going and inspire me to write more. Cheers!
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